Cool. lol. You need to improve on your argumentative essay writing. Get a better thesis statement. Football is not better than soccer.
I'm already done with high school English. I did dual enrollment over the summer through an online university. I did college English 101 composition and rhetoric. My thesis is strong and provable. I believe my final grade was 90%.
This is my rough out line:
Thesis statement: football is more of a mans game than soccer
Introduction:
Point 1: football requires more physical strength in the whole body; not just the legs.
Point 2: it requires more mental strength from the QB and generally from all the players
Point 3: it takes more skills because the players are running, throwing, catching, blocking, tackling, attempting to force fumbles, attempting to intercept, attempting to block kicks, and kicking.
Point 4: it provides low income kids with good athletic ability the chance to get into college.
Closing arguments: soccer suxs (jk, that would make a really poor closing argument)
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